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Originally Posted by Glice
What the fuck was I talking about? I've read it more than once now, and it's fucking great!!!!. The undermining of conventional writing practice by not italicising malaise is a stroke of genius! And it's not too short at all, some sentances are faaaaar too long, like this one. The fact that it's consise just adds to its greatness!
9/10.
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Actually, I'm a little bored with it now. It's fun, but I think you've done better sentances, and better paragraphs. It's still good, but I think I'll stick with a 7/10.